Nicole Lynn

If there was more punctuation it would have been a little easier to understand. For example: "Our story isn’t over- It’s just a commercial break. Wherever I go- Your love ...

The thing I hate the most is when teachers force you to write an outline or do some other stupid thing that supposed to be good for your writing. Forcing ...

Ok, well first off: slow down! Go into a little more background on the girls. What happened to their parents? How old are they? What do they look like? With ...

I liked that this showed how we argue with oursevles. It definitely reminded me of me...though I've never had a boyfriend to be bale to break up with or be ...

I liked this a lot. I did get confused when she said "as if". IN the opening paragraph you make it to be in the past, but adding the modern ...

There is good and bad to this. The good is that I liked it, and it was very entertaining. I think glorifying smoking is ok just as long as it ...